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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
I'm spotting some improvement! Namely in the fur and partially in the anatomy.
Just a little critique, I hope you do not mind!
I like how you emphasized the fur/skin on the neck, how it shows a little muscle as well as hanging off the animal like a cats' fur does. Also the butt fur looks nice, and just overall the lineart seems a bit better than normal but that may just be me. The anatomy shows improvement as well.. particularly in proportions. However I do believe that (and this goes for most other drawings too) the bodies should be a tad bit longer, and the eyes seem a little high up on the face / a little too big. The paws don't look like they're on even ground however. The closest hindleg looks a bit high, as well as the closest forleg and the paw is tilted a bit awkwardly. The farther ones look fine. The colors and the shading are all well rounded and flowing/together nicely too.